Outline

First Paragraph Intro
• I want to introduce the topic in the first paragraph. Explain what the problem is and propose that something needs to be done. I’m going to explain the trend and explain the disappointment with it.
• This paragraph will also contain my thesis statement about the topic.
• My topic is that the gym is consistently getting more crowded.
Second Graph
• I plan to use my questions from drafting and the answers to the questions.
• I will use the interview with my classmate as the first example here in the paragraph. This will help explain the point of view I’m presenting.
• I would like to include reviews if I had any online about the school gym.
Third Paragraph
• I would like to interview an outside source from the class. I’m going to interview my friend who goes to the gym at least 5 times a week. This interview could really push my essay over the top and really make the point more clear.
• I will try to introduce statistics that will back the claim up.
Fourth Paragraph
• Explain more of my opinion on the topic. I will want to go more in depth on how I feel about the trend and recommend the suggestions.
• This paragraph jus leads to the conclusion.
Conclusion
• In the conclusion I am going to include what needs to be done.
• I will also include the closing points and quote from both interviews.